Check My Poem?

I’m a Chinese student who is learning English language.

I wrote a poem in English,
but I ‘m afraid there should have been severar mistakes in it.

My Struggle

Stars twinkling,
Moonlight casting,
Every sleepless night,
witnessing my course of struggle.

Slight slight wind of spring night,
took on whose tender love?
Soft Soft rain of summer night,
brought back whose deep missing?
Ringing ringing grasshopper,
playing praise song of the autumn.
Kindle kindle silver candle,
frame out warm sentiment of the winter.
Sense of sweet,
Sense of aupicious,
All scenes of poetic flavor.

But warmth is others,
and I’ve nothing.
I just want every sleepless night,
witness my course of struggle!

Thank you for checking my pome, sincerely!

Good job! i alrdy noe english. but i don’t think i can do the same.

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